Day #22 - 2012 Haiku Challenge
The dancer's poised feet
before the sound of music
Caught in the moment
Await the music cue
The mind already dancing
Strike a dancer's pose
Practicing the art
soon her time is coming
Anklets catch the light
2012 Haiku Challenge
The dancer's poised feet
before the sound of music
Caught in the moment
Await the music cue
The mind already dancing
Strike a dancer's pose
Practicing the art
soon her time is coming
Anklets catch the light
2012 Haiku Challenge
Lovely set of haiku:)
ReplyDeleteThese tell a whole story. Grace personified.
ReplyDeleteNicely, I like the mention of the anklets, (I didn't know how to describe them)and that thought - The mind already dancing, phew!
ReplyDeleteHello Ellecee, welcome to the Haiku Challenge.
ReplyDeleteI loved the way you have written these haiku inspired by the photo. Great job!
I like "the mind already dancing." Very well crafted.
ReplyDeleteI sense the anticipation in the last one, as if she can hardly wait to begin!
ReplyDeletePainted Images here and here
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Beautiful haiku!
ReplyDeleteI like mind already dancing
ReplyDeleteNicely done! Here is my Day 22.
After practice, Anklets catch the light...Wow!..Nice expression...beautifully written
ReplyDeleteLove the sense of breathless, excited anticipation threading through the haiku! Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteyou told a beautiful story here.. Loved it..
ReplyDeletei like how it all becomes a story
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