Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Dancer's Feet

Day #22 - 2012 Haiku Challenge


The dancer's poised feet
before the sound of music
Caught in the moment



Await the music cue
The mind already dancing
Strike a dancer's pose


Practicing the art
soon her time is coming
Anklets catch the light


2012 Haiku Challenge

12 comments:

  1. These tell a whole story. Grace personified.

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  2. Nicely, I like the mention of the anklets, (I didn't know how to describe them)and that thought - The mind already dancing, phew!

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  3. Hello Ellecee, welcome to the Haiku Challenge.
    I loved the way you have written these haiku inspired by the photo. Great job!

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  4. I like "the mind already dancing." Very well crafted.

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  5. I sense the anticipation in the last one, as if she can hardly wait to begin!

    Painted Images here and here

    Would you please consider using only comment moderation and forgetting about Blogger's new, and very-difficult-to-read word verification? My eyes will thank you, and, honestly, you really don't need both. It's overkill. Thanks again.

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  6. I like mind already dancing

    Nicely done! Here is my Day 22.

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  7. After practice, Anklets catch the light...Wow!..Nice expression...beautifully written

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  8. Love the sense of breathless, excited anticipation threading through the haiku! Beautiful!

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  9. you told a beautiful story here.. Loved it..

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  10. i like how it all becomes a story

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