Day 21 - The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Theme: Dedication
My fidelity
Built on special days with you
Dedicated now
My children have flown
I await their sure return
Dedicated still
This ongoing efforting
Our love's fortune, lost,
Dedication too
Haiku Challenge - 2012
My fidelity
Built on special days with you
Dedicated now
My children have flown
I await their sure return
Dedicated still
This ongoing efforting
Our love's fortune, lost,
Dedication too
Haiku Challenge - 2012
I like how you speak of different types of dedication. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteFidelity does take dedication. Great observation.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful haiku in different perspectives....
ReplyDeleteImplicit Dedication
You find dedication in every stage.
ReplyDeleteA Lovely Dedication,first.
To remain dedicated to one's children, even after they have flown--that is true devotion, true love.
ReplyDeleteDedicated to Romancing the Wild
Fidelity is the cornerstone of lasting loving dedication! Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteHere is my Day 21.
I say you dedication is marvelous ~
ReplyDeleteThough I don't fully understand the third verse, I think over-all your set is very nice ~
Number two strikes a chord. very true :-)
ReplyDeleteI hope they return soon.. beautiful dedication.. smiles
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