Thursday, February 23, 2012

Dream Walks

Day 24 - 2012 Haiku Challenge


In the light of day
my dream walks and talks with me
unrequited love.


Remember winter
as your dream walks into spring
Icicles melting


It's too soon, too soon
I feel our dream walks fading
All flights leave at noon.



2012 Haiku Challenge

10 comments:

  1. Nice set of haiku on dream walks. Thank you for sharing.

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  2. Perfect form...what a delight to read ~

    Love this post ~

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  3. i like how you set up a little story there.

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  4. Wow, you are truly inspired to write 3! I had difficulty with just one. He he! Very nicely done!

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  5. Lovely haiku! I particularly like the second one.

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  6. I hadn't thought of that interpretation of the prompt. It works well.

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  7. I like the icikles of winter and spring meeting and melding. Too bad all flights leave at noon.

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  8. There is something very pleasing about the way this reads :-)

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  9. Different direction ~~ I'm later than usual, however ... Here is my Day 24.

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  10. a delightful haiku set to read.. Thanks!

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