Day 24 - 2012 Haiku Challenge
In the light of day
my dream walks and talks with me
unrequited love.
Remember winter
as your dream walks into spring
Icicles melting
It's too soon, too soon
I feel our dream walks fading
All flights leave at noon.
2012 Haiku Challenge
In the light of day
my dream walks and talks with me
unrequited love.
Remember winter
as your dream walks into spring
Icicles melting
It's too soon, too soon
I feel our dream walks fading
All flights leave at noon.
2012 Haiku Challenge
Nice set of haiku on dream walks. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeletePerfect form...what a delight to read ~
ReplyDeleteLove this post ~
i like how you set up a little story there.
ReplyDeleteWow, you are truly inspired to write 3! I had difficulty with just one. He he! Very nicely done!
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku! I particularly like the second one.
ReplyDeleteI hadn't thought of that interpretation of the prompt. It works well.
ReplyDeleteI like the icikles of winter and spring meeting and melding. Too bad all flights leave at noon.
ReplyDeleteThere is something very pleasing about the way this reads :-)
ReplyDeleteDifferent direction ~~ I'm later than usual, however ... Here is my Day 24.
ReplyDeletea delightful haiku set to read.. Thanks!
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