"Breathe-in experience, breathe-out Poetry"
don't we all know people like this.sometimes there are the funnest people to hang around with.
Walking the line between truth and fantasy - I pretty much ignore that line when I write and wish I could in the "real" world.
Maybe it is harder to watch a person walking a fine line than being that trapeze artist..great write..Jae
Phew, I do like the way you got that fine line in to this piece!
We mostly all do walk a fine line some of the time, don't we? Great use of the prompt :)
This sounds exactly like my sister. Excellent character portrait and superb poem.
Wow!..wow!..I really loved this...Very thoughtful...:)I wrote a similar kind on this topic before..Please check it if you get time :)http://poetrymyfeelings.blogspot.in/2011/05/unstable.html
ohh this is really really nice! I love the way it came together so quickly and with so few words.