Wednesday, March 7, 2012

3 Word Wenesday




You shock me at times
my diviant friend
who walks a minuscule line
between truth and fantasy
like a trapeze artist
balancing yourself all ways.
Working endlessly to avoid
the trivial and mundane.

8 comments:

  1. don't we all know people like this.sometimes there are the funnest people to hang around with.

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  2. Walking the line between truth and fantasy - I pretty much ignore that line when I write and wish I could in the "real" world.

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  3. Maybe it is harder to watch a person walking a fine line than being that trapeze artist..great write..Jae

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  4. Phew, I do like the way you got that fine line in to this piece!

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  5. We mostly all do walk a fine line some of the time, don't we? Great use of the prompt :)

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  6. This sounds exactly like my sister. Excellent character portrait and superb poem.

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  7. Wow!..wow!..I really loved this...Very thoughtful...:)
    I wrote a similar kind on this topic before..
    Please check it if you get time :)
    http://poetrymyfeelings.blogspot.in/2011/05/unstable.html

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  8. ohh this is really really nice! I love the way it came together so quickly and with so few words.

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