"Breathe-in experience, breathe-out Poetry" Muriel Rukeyser
I love the first one.
I have already started slowly removing non essentials.. doesn't my haiku nwo show this ellecee and it makes me more alive.. your third one gets my standing ovation.. RS:)
Nice! Second one is my favourite:)
Beautiful haiku! Ellecee! The 3rd stanza sets one thinking. We should economize on materials and efforts. By so doing we would have more fun!Hank
The second piece is a good reminder to me: Joy is here and now, not there and then. (Self: take note!)“More Dead Than Alive”
First one .. for the absoluteness of the moment.. its full of life , a yearn indeed for ... so many things :)
I like them all, but I think the question of the last is my favorite. Great takes on "alive".Richard
2nd and 3rd one...simply WOW... :)
Third one is my favorite--a nice reminder to simplify and be content :)
I love the first one.
ReplyDeleteI have already started slowly removing non essentials.. doesn't my haiku nwo show this ellecee and it makes me more alive.. your third one gets my standing ovation.. RS:)
ReplyDeleteNice! Second one is my favourite:)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haiku! Ellecee! The 3rd stanza sets one thinking. We should economize on materials and efforts. By so doing we would have more fun!
ReplyDeleteHank
The second piece is a good reminder to me: Joy is here and now, not there and then. (Self: take note!)
ReplyDelete“More Dead Than Alive”
First one .. for the absoluteness of the moment.. its full of life , a yearn indeed for ... so many things :)
ReplyDeleteI like them all, but I think the question of the last is my favorite. Great takes on "alive".
ReplyDeleteRichard
2nd and 3rd one...simply WOW... :)
ReplyDeleteThird one is my favorite--a nice reminder to simplify and be content :)
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