Sunday, April 15, 2012

The April Heights - Day 16 - #128





Being me
a difficult prompt
no haiku

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The last argument
filled with recriminations
crushed into being

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My muse is asleep
being hopeless without him
I am passing by



"ellecee"

14 comments:

  1. You did so well..your muse amuses with first one..gives a strong expression with second.. and then look at him.. going asleep..what else you needed to have passed by..

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  2. Interesting way of interpreting the prompt!!!
    I love the third one!!!

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  3. Loved the first one .......too much. and all are beautiful.

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  4. Excellent 'block' haiku! I am feeling similarly negative.

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  5. The first one made me laugh, and the last one reminded me of myself, as my muse (i.e., husband) is always asleep without me since I have chronic insomnia, ugh! :(

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  6. Well done ... no haiku you write in your contribution, but you did write a nice triplet of them.
    I too found it a bit difficult to write a haiku on being, but I succeeded.

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  7. I think you should shake your sleeping muse by the shoulders and jolt him awake! :)


    “Being the Youngest”

    “Being in Need”

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  8. Lovely set of haikus. I loved the last one.

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  9. haha..the first one :D
    n the last one also i liked :)

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  10. wonderful haiku ~ despite your muse ~ huh? ~thanks, namaste ^_^

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  11. "Being me
    a difficult prompt
    no haiku"

    I loved thiss...
    Good work!!!

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  12. :-) I often feel the same ... I was stuck on "being" also ... and a few upcoming ones as well. Sometimes I need a loud blast of dynamite to get my muse to even twitch! Have a great week!
    Day 16 ~~ Lock and Key

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  13. I like the first and third. That first one is so concise - it's perfect.

    Richard

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