You did so well..your muse amuses with first one..gives a strong expression with second.. and then look at him.. going asleep..what else you needed to have passed by..
The first one made me laugh, and the last one reminded me of myself, as my muse (i.e., husband) is always asleep without me since I have chronic insomnia, ugh! :(
Well done ... no haiku you write in your contribution, but you did write a nice triplet of them. I too found it a bit difficult to write a haiku on being, but I succeeded.
:-) I often feel the same ... I was stuck on "being" also ... and a few upcoming ones as well. Sometimes I need a loud blast of dynamite to get my muse to even twitch! Have a great week! Day 16 ~~ Lock and Key
You did so well..your muse amuses with first one..gives a strong expression with second.. and then look at him.. going asleep..what else you needed to have passed by..
ReplyDeleteInteresting way of interpreting the prompt!!!
ReplyDeleteI love the third one!!!
Loved the first one .......too much. and all are beautiful.
ReplyDeleteExcellent 'block' haiku! I am feeling similarly negative.
ReplyDeleteThe first one made me laugh, and the last one reminded me of myself, as my muse (i.e., husband) is always asleep without me since I have chronic insomnia, ugh! :(
ReplyDeleteWell done ... no haiku you write in your contribution, but you did write a nice triplet of them.
ReplyDeleteI too found it a bit difficult to write a haiku on being, but I succeeded.
I think you should shake your sleeping muse by the shoulders and jolt him awake! :)
ReplyDelete“Being the Youngest”
“Being in Need”
Lovely set of haikus. I loved the last one.
ReplyDeleteI am passing by ....
ReplyDeletehaha..the first one :D
ReplyDeleten the last one also i liked :)
wonderful haiku ~ despite your muse ~ huh? ~thanks, namaste ^_^
ReplyDelete"Being me
ReplyDeletea difficult prompt
no haiku"
I loved thiss...
Good work!!!
:-) I often feel the same ... I was stuck on "being" also ... and a few upcoming ones as well. Sometimes I need a loud blast of dynamite to get my muse to even twitch! Have a great week!
ReplyDeleteDay 16 ~~ Lock and Key
I like the first and third. That first one is so concise - it's perfect.
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