"Breathe-in experience, breathe-out Poetry"
A sense of dark regret in the first haiku that is poetically enchanting! A storm does seem to initiate deserted spaces!
Both are intense haiku.. well done..
I remember when we moved in our new house and said good-bye to our old house...love this haiku!
I like "emptied of all memories" ... strange that it really happens this way. Memories do leave together with the ones that carry them although they are fixed on the particular place!Great work!
The first haiku makes me think of the human body at death...Deserted Branches
loved the 2nd one... :)
Both are great ~ my favorite is the 2nd one ~ lovely ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
Beautiful set....But wow..I liked the second more!
Both are well crafted! The first is a bit sad.
Something very painfull I sense in this haiku set, at last the old house deserted after a long time full of life in there, makes me feel sad.
emptied of all memories is a strong line!!The second one has a strong and poignant nature imagery!!Nicely done!!
Love the imagery both evoke.