Tuesday, April 3, 2012

The April Heights - Day 4 - #116



You doubt me
no words of remorse
Game over



You said you still care
You even said I'm sorry
I doubt that you are




Many times
I called your name
Doubt returns



Spring follows Winter
The seasons will continue
Never doubt Nature




"ellecee"


13 comments:

  1. Such lovely cameo views of doubt! Doubt has its pain when there is a sense of betrayal but Nature's seasons roll on reliably!

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  2. Beautifully crafted lines, loved your work!

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  3. Very nice set and perfect form too...I specially like never doubt nature ~

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  4. Wow! Wonderful haiku ~ all of them ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  5. Doubts linger on unabated. It takes courage to ascertain And time ultimately solves! Great haiku!


    Hank

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  6. I like the game ove r part. many time i called .. is what i love ..:) nice post

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  7. Beautiful set...I loved the last one the most!

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  8. Marvelous haiku! The last one is my favorite.

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  9. heartfelt!
    Beautifully expressed!

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  10. Expression of suspicion beautifully woven!
    The last one is the ultimate!
    Adorable work!:)

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  11. oh.. i have, only hours earlier, wrote the line 'trust nature'. :)
    coincidence i see. :)

    I. Loved. The. Whole. Set, Ellecee.. Wonderful..and true..a few people do that,..the first two haiku..yes yes.. very nice..
    thank you..

    regards,
    jayanth.

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