Wednesday, April 4, 2012

The April Heights - Day 5 - #117




Waves on shore
imprints in  the sand
The tide turns



I watch them
caressing the shore
Ocean waves



I feel wave upon
wave pass through me, my terror
refusing to hide 



I see you
waving from the car
Gone again





'ellecee'

18 comments:

  1. Beautiful set of haiku ....third one is my fav! :)

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  2. Very beautiful all of them.. great work, ellecee..!!!

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  3. I'd say they are simply awesome...

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  4. Waves.. words in myriad forms......loved the use and sublimity

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  5. A touching Haiku, this one! Sensing heartbreak and isolation... This too shall pass! :)

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  6. Lovey set...I specially like caressing the shore, gone again. Perfect form too ~

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  7. Each one simiiar yet different ~ very creative ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  8. Lovely set of haiku. Loved reading this contribution to the Haiku Heights April Challenge. My favorite is the second one. Well done.

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  9. Very beautiful. I like the play of words that goes on with "wave" ;-)

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  10. I love the continuity here, it starts as a trickle and evolves into a tsunami. Well done!


    My day five

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  11. very nice Ellecee..i love the last one..:)

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  12. A great sequence. The last one is cute!

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  13. Beautiful haiku, Ellecee! Waves upon waves and waving! How nice!

    Hank

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  14. Lovely set -- I particularly like the first one!! Thank you for sharing.

    This is my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.

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  15. I feel sadness in this. It makes me think of saying goodbye to a child going back to college again, knowing that one day, they will wave goodbye and not come back to live at home again.

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  16. I like all of these. They stand on their own, yet they seem to be linked.

    Richard

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