"Breathe-in experience, breathe-out Poetry" Muriel Rukeyser
the last one is beautiful.. your theme of 'celebrating life now, this moment' is wonderful.. :)and saying "play now, work later" oh, this would bring schools, universities and workplaces down, crashing. :D they would be angry with you..
Beautiful..I hear the music...God plays it so well.. ellecee..
last one is amazing :) nice haiku :)
the last one is very romantictwo playing senryu
Perfect take on the prompt.
Very nice...dance to life and love as well.Cheers for a beautiful set ~
I love the last one. Well done.
Lovely expressive haiku that touches the inner soul ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
The first haiku set the stage and the last one plays the inner music! Delightful!
Nice. The last one plays well with my entry.
Beautiful write, Ellecee! The sharing of wonderful moments together is something made in heaven!Hank
Lovely Haiku Ellecee:-)
i love the flow of the three haiku...excellent!
Nice set Ellecee....Lets sing and dance and be full of joy!
Beautiful haiku..the last one is my favorite...dance on!
I adore that last one!
wow..awesome composition!! I love all three..I love the message u have conveyed here. "Play now, work later"..beautiful:) i think il text ur haiku to my boyfriend right away..:) :)
Loved all of them....can't say which is better
Beautiful trio ... the middle is my favorite! This is my Day 8 ~~ Waiting Their Turn.
Only a master can play such an instrument...The Christ Child at Play
Great "play" and carpe diem poems.Richard
the last one is beautiful..
ReplyDeleteyour theme of 'celebrating life now, this moment' is wonderful.. :)
and saying "play now, work later" oh, this would bring schools, universities and workplaces down, crashing. :D they would be angry with you..
Beautiful..I hear the music...God plays it so well.. ellecee..
ReplyDeletelast one is amazing :) nice haiku :)
ReplyDeletethe last one is very romantic
ReplyDeletetwo playing senryu
Perfect take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteVery nice...dance to life and love as well.
ReplyDeleteCheers for a beautiful set ~
I love the last one. Well done.
ReplyDeleteLovely expressive haiku that touches the inner soul ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteThe first haiku set the stage and the last one plays the inner music! Delightful!
ReplyDeleteNice. The last one plays well with my entry.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful write, Ellecee! The sharing of wonderful moments together is something made in heaven!
ReplyDeleteHank
Lovely Haiku Ellecee:-)
ReplyDeletei love the flow of the three haiku...excellent!
ReplyDeleteNice set Ellecee....Lets sing and dance and be full of joy!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haiku..the last one is my favorite...dance on!
ReplyDeleteI adore that last one!
ReplyDeletewow..awesome composition!! I love all three..I love the message u have conveyed here. "Play now, work later"..beautiful:) i think il text ur haiku to my boyfriend right away..:) :)
ReplyDeleteLoved all of them....can't say which is better
ReplyDeleteBeautiful trio ... the middle is my favorite!
ReplyDeleteThis is my Day 8 ~~ Waiting Their Turn.
Only a master can play such an instrument...
ReplyDeleteThe Christ Child at Play
Great "play" and carpe diem poems.
ReplyDeleteRichard