"Breathe-in experience, breathe-out Poetry"
succinct and straight-forward message of unhealthy love....well-done
Hazard of my heart. Is the danger coming from inside or out? Does it matter. Wonderful senryu!
We pin our hopes,love and affections on someone dear but sadly things didn't work out right! Nice write ellecee!Hank
The prompt words are so skilfully used..like they were meant to be exactly as you have written..sharp..jae