"Breathe-in experience, breathe-out Poetry" Muriel Rukeyser
succinct and straight-forward message of unhealthy love....well-done
well done
Hazard of my heart. Is the danger coming from inside or out? Does it matter. Wonderful senryu!
We pin our hopes,love and affections on someone dear but sadly things didn't work out right! Nice write ellecee!Hank
The prompt words are so skilfully used..like they were meant to be exactly as you have written..sharp..jae
Powerful!!
succinct and straight-forward message of unhealthy love....well-done
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ReplyDeleteHazard of my heart. Is the danger coming from inside or out? Does it matter. Wonderful senryu!
ReplyDeleteWe pin our hopes,love and affections on someone dear but sadly things didn't work out right! Nice write ellecee!
ReplyDeleteHank
The prompt words are so skilfully used..like they were meant to be exactly as you have written..sharp..jae
ReplyDeletePowerful!!
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