Friday, August 31, 2012






Lower the drawbridge
step closer to me again
castles in the air



"ellecee"



21 comments:

  1. WOW! Ellecee what a wonderful haiku. I sense a deeper meaning ... very well done. Have a good September Heights.

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  2. I love the dreamy feeling of this haiku. Thanks for sharing!

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  3. I love the surprise of the last line.

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  4. I liked, how the last line adds life to the Haiku.
    Also, I loved the phrase. =)

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  5. "Castles in the air" - dreamlike :-)

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  6. Oh, it will be so good ..excellent haiku Ellecee...building newer ones too...air will hold as many as you want..

    RS:)

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  7. This is one of the most beautiful Haiku i came across this time... beautiful!!!! :)

    Creepy thorns to glistening petals

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  8. Enjoyed it Ellecee. Keep writing :-)

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  9. I felt the longing in the word "drawbridge," too. A sad haiku, but with a hint of hope. I enjoyed it.

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  10. Thank you all so much for your kind comments on my "Drawbridge"

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  11. Such an important invitation! And what a wonderful last line :-)

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  12. Ellecee,

    Back here after a long time.. Loved your take on drawbridge!

    Someone is Special

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  13. Isn't it interesting how people keep their drawbridges up much of the time?

    Drawbridge

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  14. wonderful symbolism! well written haiku - magical

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  15. I love the image of castles in the air. Good one, Ellecee.

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  16. Ooooh, Elle, very nice!!!
    Visiting from September Heights - DrawBridge

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  17. 'Castles in the air' has been on and off my head since senior high :) Love your haiku!

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