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WOW! Ellecee what a wonderful haiku. I sense a deeper meaning ... very well done. Have a good September Heights.
I love the dreamy feeling of this haiku. Thanks for sharing!
I love the surprise of the last line.
I liked, how the last line adds life to the Haiku.Also, I loved the phrase. =)
"Castles in the air" - dreamlike :-)
Oh, it will be so good ..excellent haiku Ellecee...building newer ones too...air will hold as many as you want..RS:)
This is one of the most beautiful Haiku i came across this time... beautiful!!!! :)Creepy thorns to glistening petals
Enjoyed it Ellecee. Keep writing :-)
I felt the longing in the word "drawbridge," too. A sad haiku, but with a hint of hope. I enjoyed it.
Thank you all so much for your kind comments on my "Drawbridge"
nice opening liking your style
Such an important invitation! And what a wonderful last line :-)
Lovely take there Ellecee..
Ellecee,Back here after a long time.. Loved your take on drawbridge!Someone is Special
Isn't it interesting how people keep their drawbridges up much of the time?Drawbridge
wonderful symbolism! well written haiku - magical
I love the image of castles in the air. Good one, Ellecee.
Ooooh, Elle, very nice!!!Visiting from September Heights - DrawBridge
'Castles in the air' has been on and off my head since senior high :) Love your haiku!