"Breathe-in experience, breathe-out Poetry" Muriel Rukeyser
WOW! Ellecee what a wonderful haiku. I sense a deeper meaning ... very well done. Have a good September Heights.
I love the dreamy feeling of this haiku. Thanks for sharing!
I love the surprise of the last line.
I liked, how the last line adds life to the Haiku.Also, I loved the phrase. =)
"Castles in the air" - dreamlike :-)
Oh, it will be so good ..excellent haiku Ellecee...building newer ones too...air will hold as many as you want..RS:)
This is one of the most beautiful Haiku i came across this time... beautiful!!!! :)Creepy thorns to glistening petals
Enjoyed it Ellecee. Keep writing :-)
I felt the longing in the word "drawbridge," too. A sad haiku, but with a hint of hope. I enjoyed it.
Thank you all so much for your kind comments on my "Drawbridge"
Lovely Haiku!
nice opening liking your style
Such an important invitation! And what a wonderful last line :-)
Lovely take there Ellecee..
so romantic.
Ellecee,Back here after a long time.. Loved your take on drawbridge!Someone is Special
Isn't it interesting how people keep their drawbridges up much of the time?Drawbridge
wonderful symbolism! well written haiku - magical
I love the image of castles in the air. Good one, Ellecee.
Ooooh, Elle, very nice!!!Visiting from September Heights - DrawBridge
'Castles in the air' has been on and off my head since senior high :) Love your haiku!
WOW! Ellecee what a wonderful haiku. I sense a deeper meaning ... very well done. Have a good September Heights.
ReplyDeleteI love the dreamy feeling of this haiku. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteI love the surprise of the last line.
ReplyDeleteI liked, how the last line adds life to the Haiku.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I loved the phrase. =)
"Castles in the air" - dreamlike :-)
ReplyDeleteOh, it will be so good ..excellent haiku Ellecee...building newer ones too...air will hold as many as you want..
ReplyDeleteRS:)
This is one of the most beautiful Haiku i came across this time... beautiful!!!! :)
ReplyDeleteCreepy thorns to glistening petals
Enjoyed it Ellecee. Keep writing :-)
ReplyDeleteI felt the longing in the word "drawbridge," too. A sad haiku, but with a hint of hope. I enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteThank you all so much for your kind comments on my "Drawbridge"
ReplyDeleteLovely Haiku!
ReplyDeletenice opening liking your style
ReplyDeleteSuch an important invitation! And what a wonderful last line :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely take there Ellecee..
ReplyDeleteso romantic.
ReplyDeleteEllecee,
ReplyDeleteBack here after a long time.. Loved your take on drawbridge!
Someone is Special
Isn't it interesting how people keep their drawbridges up much of the time?
ReplyDeleteDrawbridge
wonderful symbolism! well written haiku - magical
ReplyDeleteI love the image of castles in the air. Good one, Ellecee.
ReplyDeleteOoooh, Elle, very nice!!!
ReplyDeleteVisiting from September Heights - DrawBridge
'Castles in the air' has been on and off my head since senior high :) Love your haiku!
ReplyDelete