Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Autumn






I pick up the rake
the last leaves have fallen now
Let's walk away




"ellecee





16 comments:

  1. You've created a wonderful mood. I'm with you. Let's walk away.

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  2. Charming! I love associating autumn with a walk among fallen leaves.

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  3. A touch of sadness in this one. Nicely done!

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  4. Nice take - I sense of satisfaction

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  5. Ellecee,
    Let's walk away has so much to convey!
    especially after the last leaves have fallen.

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  6. Gorgeous haiku ... just gorgeous. Don't pick up the rake ... those colorful leaves are a joy to look at.

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  7. The last leaves falling ... lovely picture of the autumn !!!

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  8. Oh, there is such a finality to these words. Very well written

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  9. Gosh, how I remember raking up all those leaves :)

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  10. I agree -- as much a fall is my favorite season, and I love to play in the leaves -- I dislike raking them ... perhaps, it is because the leaves I play in are autumnal colors, and the ones I must rake are brown-brown. We do not get fall colors in Central TX ... I usually have to travel to see the colored ones.

    September Heights - Autumn

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  11. oh, lovely ellecee. enjoyed how 'let's walk away
    echoes the ending of a season.

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  12. I will gladly walk with you. Who needs a rake anyway?

    My Lady Autumn

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  13. Walk away into winter, Elle? :)

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  14. let's walk way.. Conveys a lot Ellecee.. :)

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