"Breathe-in experience, breathe-out Poetry" Muriel Rukeyser
A snapshot of long years marked by loss, well done.
Wow! A lovely surprise ending! Very nice!
I like this. There's a bittersweet feeling that touches the heart.
WOW! This is really a nice haiku Ellecee. Love the way you've used the prompt in this one ... so nostalgic and ... a little bit melancholic.
ohh i really like this.. sad but lovely
Excellent..and we all have such pictures at home.. I liked it a lot..
Powerful and touching. I enjoyed this one.
This left me thinking !!!
Very well expressed. :-)Just a few days back I was going through my childhood pictures and was flushed with nostalgia. You haiku did the same to me. :-)
wow...the sadness touched me...good work:)
Perfect...very lovely haiku ~
I hope that the wearing off is merely literal!
realistic and nostalgic !
Cherished memories tinged with sadness...
There is a nice sadness to this one good write
it touched the chords deep within..
Oh, I love this. The tender, sad feeling went right through me.
...sad but touching
Bitter-sweetness ... great job!September Heights - Glossy Sheen
This one is layered with meaning upon meaning...For example, did she only have a picture of him as she lived with him all those years, and suddenly she woke up one day to find that the picture was wrong?Lost Gloss
A snapshot of long years marked by loss, well done.
ReplyDeleteWow! A lovely surprise ending! Very nice!
ReplyDeleteI like this. There's a bittersweet feeling that touches the heart.
ReplyDeleteWOW! This is really a nice haiku Ellecee. Love the way you've used the prompt in this one ... so nostalgic and ... a little bit melancholic.
ReplyDeleteohh i really like this.. sad but lovely
ReplyDeleteExcellent..and we all have such pictures at home.. I liked it a lot..
ReplyDeletePowerful and touching. I enjoyed this one.
ReplyDeleteThis left me thinking !!!
ReplyDeleteVery well expressed. :-)
ReplyDeleteJust a few days back I was going through my childhood pictures and was flushed with nostalgia. You haiku did the same to me. :-)
wow...the sadness touched me...good work:)
ReplyDeletePerfect...very lovely haiku ~
ReplyDeleteI hope that the wearing off is merely literal!
ReplyDeleterealistic and nostalgic !
ReplyDeleteCherished memories tinged with sadness...
ReplyDeleteThere is a nice sadness to this one good write
ReplyDeleteit touched the chords deep within..
ReplyDeleteOh, I love this. The tender, sad feeling went right through me.
ReplyDelete...sad but touching
ReplyDeleteBitter-sweetness ... great job!
ReplyDeleteSeptember Heights - Glossy Sheen
This one is layered with meaning upon meaning...
ReplyDeleteFor example, did she only have a picture of him as she lived with him all those years, and suddenly she woke up one day to find that the picture was wrong?
Lost Gloss