Tuesday, September 25, 2012

PAPER BOAT








Our relationship
paper boat on a smooth sea
Beware the waves




"ellecee"

14 comments:

  1. Fantastic description of many relationships!!!

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  2. Beware the waves!...Good one Ellecee....

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  3. Yes, beware the waves because relationships are fragile! Great advice.

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  4. I love your take on the prompt; yes, relationships must be strong to bear storms.
    :)

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  5. Ah beware the waves indeed, a good write

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  6. Careful not to rock the boat then :)

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  7. Wow! What an analogy!! Some relationships are like that! Good one Ellecee.

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  8. Very vivid danger sign, a stage to go through. Thank you for your comments on my Haiku, too.

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  9. A beautiful metaphor of relationships. Very well done. Glad for the visit to my place. :-)

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  10. Ah! What an image you paint here. Be sure that you're save in your boat on rocking waves.

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  11. Indeed, beware the waves, or the poor little boat will be swamped.

    Paper Boat

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