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Great take on the prompt! I like it.
nice well maybe not the best use, our words spewing out first quarrel me likes that
Wonderful and so true.
Very nice...that last line was a surprise ~
Oh, nice take on the prompt! The last line made it.
wonderful indeed...Thanks a lot for all your visits and the refreshing comments on my writings...keep visiting
Wow ... surprising take on the prompt :-)
Oh! Hope you made up! Great evocative lines that we can all relate to.
Wow! A fine take on the prompt.
Unfortunately, the first quarrel is never the last.Pepper Tree
Very fiery :)
Maybe that's a sign that the relationship is going okay.. a fight once a while.. as long as the pepper is followed by the sweet of making up. :)
Awesome haiku. The first quarrel all the more reason to make it right again ... maybe some peppered food :-)
Oh wow. I can feel the heat off the words.
I agree, awesome haiku...Peace,Siggi in Downeast Maine, USA
oooh, first fights ... awesome direction.September Heights - Cayenne Dash
Oh yes. I remember these in my life!