Saturday, September 8, 2012

PEPPER







Pepper hot
our words spewing out
First quarrel






"ellecee"

17 comments:

  1. Great take on the prompt! I like it.

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  2. nice well maybe not the best use, our words spewing out first quarrel me likes that

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  3. Very nice...that last line was a surprise ~

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  4. Oh, nice take on the prompt! The last line made it.

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  5. wonderful indeed...

    Thanks a lot for all your visits and the refreshing comments on my writings...keep visiting

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  6. Wow ... surprising take on the prompt :-)

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  7. Oh! Hope you made up! Great evocative lines that we can all relate to.

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  8. Maybe that's a sign that the relationship is going okay.. a fight once a while.. as long as the pepper is followed by the sweet of making up. :)

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  9. Awesome haiku. The first quarrel all the more reason to make it right again ... maybe some peppered food :-)

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  10. Oh wow. I can feel the heat off the words.

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  11. I agree, awesome haiku...
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine, USA

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  12. oooh, first fights ... awesome direction.
    September Heights - Cayenne Dash

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  13. Oh yes. I remember these in my life!

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