Tuesday, September 11, 2012

RAIN



 



Raindrops are falling
caught up in the peace of now
I lie and listen




"ellecee"

15 comments:

  1. That peace is priceless. Absolutely priceless :)

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  2. The alliteration "lie and listen" - very lyrical

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  3. You've created such a peaceful poem. I am right there!

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  4. sounds peaceful, calm and serene.

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  5. Love the feeling of peace in the rain. Sometimes I listen to it too.

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  6. I love the middle line! And the whole haiku. Thanks for sharing it

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  7. What a great place to be... in the now. So simple and beautiful.

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  8. Must be so very meditative.. great take..

    RS:)

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  9. Peacefully lying down to listen to the steady rhythm of the rain on the roof. A good one. Well done.

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  10. I lie and listen.....Me too!!.....I love the music of nature....esp music of rain....

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  11. I know this is silly, but the thing that impresses me most about this piece is that you have used the word "lie" correctly. Ninety percent of the population would have written/said "lay." Congratulations for using English properly in a world were language sloppiness is the norm!

    Seven Rains

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  12. There is something magical about listening to the rain -- especially on a tin roof!! Thank you!
    September Heights - Skies' Joy

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