Friday, September 7, 2012

RENDER







You are my heart's song
gift from a generous god
Render me helpless





"ellecee"





17 comments:

  1. Love the romance in this.

    (and, yeah, me at my age too!)

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  2. very lovely and romantic....I am going to say this to my husband tonite!

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  3. lovely and yes, romantic

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  4. Powerfully romantic and so evocative. Well done

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  5. Oh lovely! Will you ask your generous god to send me my own 'heart's song' too? :)

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  6. Ah!...Lovely haiku!...sweet and romantic!

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  7. Oh, I love this. So romantic and contemplative at the same time. Thank you so much for sharing it.

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  8. I enjoyed the love woven through it!!

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  9. Love this :) Romantic and endearing...

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  10. Aw. Walk toward such possibility! Thank you for visiting my blog and leaving an appreciative comment.

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