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Ooooh ....., very different and packs a major punch - right in the gut - excellent !
There's such sadness here. Well done.
Ohh, a different take completely.Hope the world looks better now ☺Thank you for sharing an interestinghaiku.Peace,Siggi in Downeast Maine
Which ones...so? Me too! Tea? Especially Dough:) Ain't that a helluva note?
some days are like that! Very nice finish!!
Terrible when your notes are missing. A lifeline of scholarship. It can be traumatic! Nicely Ellecee!Hank
So well said in so few words!
Missing notes is haunting !!!
Missing notes made me chuckle nice write
ow, how sad. This is powerful.
Ouch! That happens to me too. Well-written on a very unique take on the word.
Depressing, indeed :-) The haiku is great!
Nice work. Some days I too am not in tuned. Well done.Melanie
Oh, it happens..and it's alright..RS:)
The 'missing notes' completes the haiku brilliantly.
missing notes.. what a great ending! I love it! It's simple and concise.
It happens dear..sometimes the notes are missing ..good one
Lovely haiku, very sad
Ah.. one stray note can be so depressing.
Nice twist from the rest!
Well I hope you find your notes very soon ~ Nice one ~
I think I had a missing-note day too...Symphony of Seeds
Wow! This is a refreshing take on the prompt...hope the notes are found soon :)http://merlinspielen.com/2012/09/13/summer-symphony/
Oh how sad to "miss notes". Nicely crafted. September Heights - Repertoire of Notes