Wednesday, September 12, 2012

SYMPHONY









Symphony
depressing my day
missing notes






"ellecee"



24 comments:

  1. Ooooh ....., very different and packs a major punch - right in the gut - excellent !

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  2. There's such sadness here. Well done.

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  3. Ohh, a different take completely.
    Hope the world looks better now ☺
    Thank you for sharing an interesting
    haiku.
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  4. Which ones...so? Me too! Tea? Especially Dough:) Ain't that a helluva note?

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  5. some days are like that! Very nice finish!!

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  6. Terrible when your notes are missing. A lifeline of scholarship. It can be traumatic! Nicely Ellecee!

    Hank

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  7. Missing notes made me chuckle nice write

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  8. Ouch! That happens to me too. Well-written on a very unique take on the word.

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  9. Depressing, indeed :-) The haiku is great!

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  10. Nice work. Some days I too am not in tuned. Well done.



    Melanie

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  11. Oh, it happens..and it's alright..

    RS:)

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  12. The 'missing notes' completes the haiku brilliantly.

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  13. missing notes.. what a great ending! I love it! It's simple and concise.

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  14. It happens dear..sometimes the notes are missing ..good one

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  15. Ah.. one stray note can be so depressing.

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  16. Well I hope you find your notes very soon ~ Nice one ~

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  17. Wow! This is a refreshing take on the prompt...hope the notes are found soon :)
    http://merlinspielen.com/2012/09/13/summer-symphony/

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