Monday, March 18, 2013

Mist





What remains
ethereal about the
mist
the soft moisture
left
from a casual
kiss






"ellecee"



13 comments:

  1. This packed a lot of emotions in few words !!!

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    1. Thank you, GS,,your thoughts are appreciated,,, :-)

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  2. Beautiful. Though I wonder about this "casual" kiss. Was it not passionate as well?

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    1. That's the mystery, Ben,,,,thanks for your kind words,,,,,

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  3. Hopefully more than a casual kiss...I wonder about the "aout", is it supposed to be "about" ~ Nicely done ~

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  4. That's part of the mystery,,how casual was the kiss :-) Thanks so much for your comment and thank you for pointing out the error - I have corrected it. It's always a pleasure to see you here :-)

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  5. Big soppy grin...
    you might enjoy this love poem inspired by a love poem...

    http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2013/03/love-poem-just-desserts.html

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  6. O! I am so in love with this misty poem.

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    1. Thank you so much Paige, I appreciate your words,,

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  7. sweetly brief and yet lingers deliciously..

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    1. Thank you jaerose,,I really appreciate your visit,,

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  8. I am a fan of love poetry...one never knows where a kiss will lead. :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Susie, for coming by and leaving your kind words,,,,

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