Wednesday, December 3, 2014

Queen of the Night



As twilight moves away
and darkness engulfs me with its
solemn breath
you come to me
and we open ourselves to
one another
our skin soft and delicate
as exotic kadupuls
blooming
beginning
and
end




"ellecee"


Written in response to Susie's prompt on

12 comments:

  1. This so beautiful, romantic. Thank you so much for writing for the challenge.

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  2. Such an effective metaphoric response to this prompt.

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  3. I love the use of metaphor...beautiful words, Elecee.

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  4. Nicely done. It's sensual in a respectful way.

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  5. I love the romance and enchantment of opening up to each other ~ Good to see you again Elecee ~

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  6. How wonderful, this softness within a life!

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  7. Sweet and sensual at the same time.

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  8. A dreamy, romantic piece. I enjoyed this!

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