Saturday, April 16, 2016

For Solace


For solace
I stand before
this sculpture
and I see myself
mute
My eyes, nose and ears
blown away
ripped away
by you
and your demonic needs
unmet
Made to feel nothing
but inadequate
I survive
I will survive
I will speak
someday
for now I am
a muted mouth
your
remains



"ellecee"






Imaginary Garden with Real Toads
Today Karin has provided us with
some of her own very interesting photos to act
as a prompt for our poems. 


Day 16

9 comments:

  1. Oh wow! This is a painful place to be, but you speak of the strong will to survive.

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  2. Ouch. Very strong indictment. Distilled and powerful, thanks. K.

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  3. I hope the melancholy and hope in her tone turns into a roar that rips the thief of the ground and makes him scream all his trespasses.

    Your poem makes me feel for both of them... the speaker and the sculpture.

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  4. She already knows her spirit will rise, and she will speak. I remember once horrifying my ex by threatening to expose him in print, LOL. I never did - so far.

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  5. You have moved into the sculpture and become the sculpture. A dramatic transformation.

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  6. Moving words! Violent yet empowering, I like that she survives it.

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  7. A powerful survival poem....a rising up from the ashes sort of piece....love the triumph that is bound to come after this :-)

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  8. Such will to survive...amazing.

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