Saturday, February 11, 2017

Awakening


Tenderness is a lie,
compassion folly,
intimacy a pretender
stealing the night
creating fantasies
dreams with rude
awakening
 
One day all will be lost
secrets revealed
sorrow
awakening
 
I don't believe her
I am beyond doubt
I know his tenderness
is true
His compassion
Our intimacies
that steal the night
our dreams
joy
 
awakening
 
 
 
"ellecee"
 
 
 
Written for
 


9 comments:

  1. Awakening to joy is the best space to be and to reach there through love is just heavenly. A beautiful one.

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  2. Lets hope you are right and the voice of your conscience incorrect.

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  3. Whistles!!!❤️❤️This is absolutely gorgeous writing, Linda! I love the passion and credence which accompanies these lines; "I am beyond doubt, I know his tenderness is true, his compassion,
    our intimacies that steal the night our dreams, joy, awakening" sigh.. beautifully executed! Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support❤️❤️


    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  4. Beautifully penned. The awakening comes finally with love, the true and eternal one... :-)

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  5. When the heart leads the head we can only hope. Nicely done

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  6. I liked the way you switched the protagonist's mental focus halfway through. The reader of course is left to wonder who has the right of it. I always hope for happy endings.

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  7. Thank you for weaving this dream for us to enjoy

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  8. Life a love are a dance of perspective, which often can't agree with each other. I'm a lover, so I will wish for the second voice to be the winner. ❤️

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  9. I luv happy endings so I routing for the voice of self
    A Happy St Valentine's Day to you

    much love...

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