Day 23 - 2012 Haiku Challenge
Contemplating you
the idea of a man
who compliments me
Who compliments me
This constant man, the source of
my joy of giving
My joy of giving
centres on these wistful thoughts
contemplating you.
Unexpected gifts
Reflect the joy of giving
Ask nothing returned
Ask nothing returned
No expectation of gain
Generosity
Generosity
Never to see rescinding
Unexpected gifts
2012 Haiku Challenge
Contemplating you
the idea of a man
who compliments me
Who compliments me
This constant man, the source of
my joy of giving
My joy of giving
centres on these wistful thoughts
contemplating you.
Unexpected gifts
Reflect the joy of giving
Ask nothing returned
Ask nothing returned
No expectation of gain
Generosity
Generosity
Never to see rescinding
Unexpected gifts
2012 Haiku Challenge
Contemplating you too!
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I love this haiku on the Joy of Giving very much. I had some problems writing this form of haiku, but ... I tried.
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I love both of these! I like how the words "contemplate" and "compliment" complement each other!
ReplyDeleteI agree with your message..the joy of giving contemplates with us expecting nothing in return..nice message ;)
ReplyDeleteYou went above and beyond!
ReplyDeleteUnexpected gifts are wonderful.
Beautiful, quiet thoughts on the wonder of gift giving!
ReplyDeleteThis was indeed difficult to write.. but you did very well..thanks..
ReplyDeleteThis was indeed difficult to write.. but you did very well..thanks..
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully written.....Actually I guess you penned what you felt and experienced..Thanks for sharing
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Nice set of haiku:)
ReplyDeleteThe second set is enchanting, Ellecee, although the first one's lovely too!
ReplyDeleteFor some, it is as hard to receive as it is to give without expectation. Nicely done! Here is my Day 23.
ReplyDeleteVery sweet and romantic write...Perfect form and pattern ~
ReplyDeleteWell done ~
beautiful Joy Ellecee.. SmileS..
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