"Breathe-in experience, breathe-out Poetry" Muriel Rukeyser
Great haiku pair! Love can leave many memories!Hank
fragrant dried roses. yes that's a memory some of us have of past love.Beautifully put.
A delight to read these lovely haiku..beautiful weaved..
This is like pot pourri..the jostles of everyday life that people experience..and yet the smell of roses makes it a personal treasure..snuggle up..Jae
The first is my favorite.
That first poem is provocative and evocative. Nice work.
I enjoy the victorian romance feel of this poem, Elle.
Both of these convey memories, nicely done!
The second haiku describes places I've been on planet love...Nicely done!My 3WW
Wonderfully crafted haiku duo. Loved reading this one. Thank you for sharing.
Great haiku pair! Love can leave many memories!
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fragrant dried roses. yes that's a memory some of us have of past love.Beautifully put.
ReplyDeleteA delight to read these lovely haiku..beautiful weaved..
ReplyDeleteThis is like pot pourri..the jostles of everyday life that people experience..and yet the smell of roses makes it a personal treasure..snuggle up..Jae
ReplyDeleteThe first is my favorite.
ReplyDeleteThat first poem is provocative and evocative. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy the victorian romance feel of this poem, Elle.
ReplyDeleteBoth of these convey memories, nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThe second haiku describes places I've been on planet love...
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
My 3WW
Wonderfully crafted haiku duo. Loved reading this one. Thank you for sharing.
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