"Breathe-in experience, breathe-out Poetry"
the second 'ku really taps the target of myself and most people - don't judge me,just love me.
I love both of this
I feel the second poem as the loudest..truest voice..i think that's what we all need..and crave..Jae
I think I like the first one best, but both are good.
I like your thoughts here...acceptance is what all of us strive for isn't it?