Saturday, September 15, 2012

GRASS







Over the flatlands
undulating colours mix
Prairie grasses thrive




"ellecee'





19 comments:

  1. Oh, I love this image with undulating colors! Beautiful.

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  2. I too like the undulating colors mix ~ A lovely image of prairie grass ~

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  3. I see the grasses rippling in the slightest breeze...


    Grass

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  4. The undulating colors! - perfect description.

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  5. I like this...maybe you could omit 'thrive' in L3...just sharing my thought.

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    1. I could but then my haiku count would be off. So it's a toss up between artistic value and perfect form. Thanks for the suggestion though - I always appreciate input.

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  6. How lovely,I can see the grass waving in the breeze :)

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  7. Congratiolations... love the word undulate

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  8. I want to thank everyone for stopping by and leaving your special words for me. I really do appreciate each and every one.

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  9. Love the imagery captured here... I can almost see it.

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  10. That's just lovely, Ellecee. It's presents such a peaceful image.

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  11. As a prairie dweller I love this haiku. Undulating is exactly the right word!

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  12. Beautiful.. and I tend to agree with K2S. That last word can be left out, and the word "Prairie grasses" would speak the word "thrive" even without it. Haiku in English gives you the freedom of under 17 syllables too.

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  13. I am there ... beautifully woven!!

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