I could but then my haiku count would be off. So it's a toss up between artistic value and perfect form. Thanks for the suggestion though - I always appreciate input.
Beautiful.. and I tend to agree with K2S. That last word can be left out, and the word "Prairie grasses" would speak the word "thrive" even without it. Haiku in English gives you the freedom of under 17 syllables too.
Oh, I love this image with undulating colors! Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI too like the undulating colors mix ~ A lovely image of prairie grass ~
ReplyDeleteI see the grasses rippling in the slightest breeze...
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The undulating colors! - perfect description.
ReplyDeleteI like this...maybe you could omit 'thrive' in L3...just sharing my thought.
ReplyDeleteI could but then my haiku count would be off. So it's a toss up between artistic value and perfect form. Thanks for the suggestion though - I always appreciate input.
DeleteExpanses of greenery :-)
ReplyDeleteHow true...good one!
ReplyDeleteHow lovely,I can see the grass waving in the breeze :)
ReplyDeletevery lovely imagery
ReplyDeleteundulating colors... nice!!
ReplyDeleteCongratiolations... love the word undulate
ReplyDeleteI want to thank everyone for stopping by and leaving your special words for me. I really do appreciate each and every one.
ReplyDeleteLove the imagery captured here... I can almost see it.
ReplyDeleteThat's just lovely, Ellecee. It's presents such a peaceful image.
ReplyDeleteAs a prairie dweller I love this haiku. Undulating is exactly the right word!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.. and I tend to agree with K2S. That last word can be left out, and the word "Prairie grasses" would speak the word "thrive" even without it. Haiku in English gives you the freedom of under 17 syllables too.
ReplyDeleteI am there ... beautifully woven!!
ReplyDeletea charming write today
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