Poetry is an act of peace. – Pablo Neruda
The last line takes your description to the artistic level. Lovely impression of the painting.
Yes, her eyes really do seem to be speaking--an elegant yet simple response in one of my favorite forms. Thanks for participating.
So romantic. Lovely haiku
She does have eyes full of promise and beguiling! Well done.
I was fascinated by this painting, but didn't know why. Of course, you're right, her eyes are so expressive. I had to choose others because I couldn't decipher this one, but you've done it perfectly.K
I do see those beguiling eyes ~ A lovely senryu ~
Yes, the look of enchantment n' wonder!So lovely
The flower must die to be picked, as must our eyes in many ways...
You SO caught her expression in words. Lovely.
Your haiku is lovely .........
beguile... yes, that does so fit this painting.
Love the flowers to be picked metaphor. And those eyes...
Captivating - eyes and words.
Well, those eyes are intriguing...inviting.
Lovely senryu ... fits the romantic mood of the painting. Thank you for your nice comment on my poem :)