Day #27 - 2012 Haiku Challenge
Theme: Paint the Image
Form: Haiku
Theme: Paint the Image
Form: Haiku
Open sesame
Star of David on the gate
Barren and empty
Questions asked later
Symbol of the Holacaust?
Gated forever
Star of unity
Rendered on an open gate
Truths may rest beyond
Ellecee ... this series of haiku leaves me in awe. You have really painted the image with your words and composed a wonderful haiku. I especially like the third one:
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Rendered on an open gate
Truths may rest beyond
This is such a wise remark. Thank you for sharing and letting us be part of your inspiration and joy of sharing.
Namaste
"Truths may rest beyond"
ReplyDeleteI sense hope in these words!
I loved the Last one,most powerful and optimistic.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set...But, I loved the last haiku bit more......Very powerful....Thanks for sharing :)
ReplyDeleteOpen gate of your heart
Beautiful set...I like all of them ~
ReplyDeleteTruths may rest beyond
ReplyDeletePowerful and optimistic truth be told. Thank you for sharing your perspective. Here is my Day 27.
Very nicely done..
ReplyDeleteTruths may rest beyond, indeed. Well done.
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trust may rest beyond.. Great!
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