"Breathe-in experience, breathe-out Poetry" Muriel Rukeyser
Sounds mysterious! Like!!
Precious and tenacious. Life's struggle in a lovely haiku! Nicely Ellecee!Hank
I enjoyed your haiku on footprint. It's nice when the rain leaves something beautiful behind.
That's mysterious!
There's a bit of mystery here. I like it.
"in spite of the rain" - great image and words to describe the indelible.
Some footprints are never washed away :-)
Wow, most the haiku I've been reading on footprints are about fragility. I love that this one speaks of stability.
Optimistic, and positive. You have avoided the temptation for pathos!
Now THAT'S a sturdy footprint!Footprint
Sounds mysterious! Like!!
ReplyDeletePrecious and tenacious. Life's struggle in a lovely haiku! Nicely Ellecee!
ReplyDeleteHank
I enjoyed your haiku on footprint. It's nice when the rain leaves something beautiful behind.
ReplyDeleteThat's mysterious!
ReplyDeleteThere's a bit of mystery here. I like it.
ReplyDelete"in spite of the rain" - great image and words to describe the indelible.
ReplyDeleteSome footprints are never washed away :-)
ReplyDeleteWow, most the haiku I've been reading on footprints are about fragility. I love that this one speaks of stability.
ReplyDeleteOptimistic, and positive. You have avoided the temptation for pathos!
ReplyDeleteNow THAT'S a sturdy footprint!
ReplyDeleteFootprint