"Breathe-in experience, breathe-out Poetry" Muriel Rukeyser
If well deserved, I congratulate the winner as I know it takes a lot of hard work ~
Great concrete imagery
That last line is great. I like it!
Good catch of the prompt...love the last line....so true, not often recognized.Peace,Siggi in Downeast Maine, USA
Glory to all those who fight for a good cause, losers or winners, yes.Terrific use of shrivel in your haiku!
Winning can be glorious!
So true!...Beautifully penned haiku Ellecee
How very true good write
The winner takes all, but also the loser get 's glory ... to be runner up brings glory too.
So true :-)
"losers shrivel" ... awww, I always feel bad for them, especially when they gave their all in the effort! September Heights - Sings Sun's Glory
Pity the poor loser!Two Glories: Litter and Flower
I love this haiku, brilliant line Losers shrivel!
Perfect
If well deserved, I congratulate the winner as I know it takes a lot of hard work ~
ReplyDeleteGreat concrete imagery
ReplyDeleteThat last line is great. I like it!
ReplyDeleteGood catch of the prompt...love the last line....so true, not often recognized.
ReplyDeletePeace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine, USA
Glory to all those who fight for a good cause, losers or winners, yes.
ReplyDeleteTerrific use of shrivel in your haiku!
Winning can be glorious!
ReplyDeleteSo true!...Beautifully penned haiku Ellecee
ReplyDeleteHow very true good write
ReplyDeleteThe winner takes all, but also the loser get 's glory ... to be runner up brings glory too.
ReplyDeleteSo true :-)
ReplyDelete"losers shrivel" ... awww, I always feel bad for them, especially when they gave their all in the effort!
ReplyDeleteSeptember Heights - Sings Sun's Glory
Pity the poor loser!
ReplyDeleteTwo Glories: Litter and Flower
I love this haiku, brilliant line Losers shrivel!
ReplyDeletePerfect
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