I know this is silly, but the thing that impresses me most about this piece is that you have used the word "lie" correctly. Ninety percent of the population would have written/said "lay." Congratulations for using English properly in a world were language sloppiness is the norm!
That peace is priceless. Absolutely priceless :)
ReplyDeleteThe alliteration "lie and listen" - very lyrical
ReplyDeleteYou've created such a peaceful poem. I am right there!
ReplyDeletesounds peaceful, calm and serene.
ReplyDeleteLove the feeling of peace in the rain. Sometimes I listen to it too.
ReplyDeleteA lovely calming haiku.
ReplyDeleteWonderful scenery here !!!
ReplyDeleteI love the middle line! And the whole haiku. Thanks for sharing it
ReplyDeleteWhat a great place to be... in the now. So simple and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteMust be so very meditative.. great take..
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Peacefully lying down to listen to the steady rhythm of the rain on the roof. A good one. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI lie and listen.....Me too!!.....I love the music of nature....esp music of rain....
ReplyDeleteI know this is silly, but the thing that impresses me most about this piece is that you have used the word "lie" correctly. Ninety percent of the population would have written/said "lay." Congratulations for using English properly in a world were language sloppiness is the norm!
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Nice write
ReplyDeleteThere is something magical about listening to the rain -- especially on a tin roof!! Thank you!
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