"Breathe-in experience, breathe-out Poetry" Muriel Rukeyser
Bloody hell ellecee, you're not about to snuff it are you?Where will my comment box be without you :)
Not a chance :-) Just poetic license.
two succinct beauties - love: your love fills all my needs - yes!
Both of them are precious, so romantic.Filled up with love; empty, dead without it,"Rigor Mortis", wowww...
I love the dichotomy of the two poems. Beautifully written.
Terrific set! And I love the title too!
Perfect. Perfect haiku. And Black and White is the perfect title for these.
Love starvation ... Isn't that sad?
Bless that love. May it never cease.
To be starved of love is the worst kind. Interesting take on the prompt.
Nice write splendid way to put it together
The rigor mortis caught me by surprise--which is what you intended, I'm sure!Starve
Love does that to you often .. sigh ! heartfelt :)
Awesome ... take on starve. Wonderfully crafted.
Wow, powerful and stunning, Ellecee.
Oh yes. Well done.
No love, that's the worst starvation :(
Powerful pair. Consistent giving I love.
Very romantic! Great take on the prompt.
Bloody hell ellecee, you're not about to snuff it are you?
ReplyDeleteWhere will my comment box be without you :)
Not a chance :-) Just poetic license.
Deletetwo succinct beauties - love: your love fills all my needs - yes!
ReplyDeleteBoth of them are precious, so romantic.
ReplyDeleteFilled up with love; empty, dead without it,"Rigor Mortis", wowww...
I love the dichotomy of the two poems. Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteTerrific set! And I love the title too!
ReplyDeletePerfect. Perfect haiku. And Black and White is the perfect title for these.
ReplyDeleteLove starvation ... Isn't that sad?
ReplyDeleteBless that love. May it never cease.
ReplyDeleteTo be starved of love is the worst kind. Interesting take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteNice write splendid way to put it together
ReplyDeleteThe rigor mortis caught me by surprise--which is what you intended, I'm sure!
ReplyDeleteStarve
Love does that to you often .. sigh ! heartfelt :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome ... take on starve. Wonderfully crafted.
ReplyDeleteWow, powerful and stunning, Ellecee.
ReplyDeleteOh yes. Well done.
ReplyDeleteNo love, that's the worst starvation :(
ReplyDeletePowerful pair. Consistent giving I love.
ReplyDeleteVery romantic! Great take on the prompt.
ReplyDelete