WHO
Who?
Who?
Was it you?
I want to pound
the earth
I scream
Was it you?
What was it?
What did you do?
Cause doubt?
Steal a life?
Cause a fault
in the fabric
that is me?
An intense
secret
pleasure
for you
A loss
forever
for me.
"ellecee"
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The questions format is effective ~
ReplyDeleteSadly, some of us don't hear the scream nor feel the pain of other women ~ Thanks for sharing this ~
It's a learning process, for me it has been anyway,,, Thanks so much for your comment Grace, your thoughts are appreciated,,, :-)
DeleteI hope the loss is not irreparable !!!
ReplyDeleteWe can only hope, GS. Thanks so much for your visit,,,
DeleteSuch a raw write of pain...often we hear but don't respond to the pain of others...
ReplyDeletethis is so true, Susie,,,thank you so much for dropping by,,,,
DeleteThis is a real scream..in form and word..and yet it is one that seems in control..motivated..justly directed..hope this is so..
ReplyDeleteYes it is so,,,Thank you so much for your visit and your words,,,,
DeleteThat's so sad and painful! Beautiful lines Ellecee!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Sri,,,for your words and your visit,,,
DeleteI liked this. It's refreshing to read questions.
ReplyDeleteYes, Ben, even the hard ones,,,,good to see you here,,,thanks for coming,,,
DeleteSad when that is true. You have captured it well.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for your words and your visit here,,,,good to see you,,,
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