NaPoWriMo DayThree
Kerry's Wednesday Challenge ~ Existentialism
If
it doesn’t matter
then it doesn’t matter
who I choose to love
above all others in this
here and now
Or that I choose a narrow path
and not get lost in magnitude
If
it doesn’t matter
then it doesn’t matter
that I choose to hear the canary’s song
and not the vulture’s groan
I can accept the fault as mine
if tears instead of smiles abound
I alone choose
to make or break
to love or hate
to share or hoard
all at my own accord
If
it doesn’t matter
then it doesn’t matter
that there is no special
world beyond this present one
when all of this
is said and done
“ellecee”
I found it fascinating to follow your train of thought in this poem. Many excellent lines to quote, but I really like the ideas expressed here:
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it doesn’t matter
then it doesn’t matter
that I choose to hear the canary’s song
and not the vulture’s groan
I can accept the fault as mine
if tears instead of smiles abound
What a big question that 'if' is...
ReplyDeleteLovely poem Ellecee! So true! I agree there would be no special world if that's done!
ReplyDeleteWowzers, what a write! I especially love choosing the canary's song rather than the vulture's groan.
ReplyDeleteAnd so it is ~ You have captured the spirit of existentialism ~
ReplyDeleteSpot on! Existentialism at its best ... 'when all of this is said and done'
ReplyDeleteI think it would be better to make this world the best we could. Let this world be our heaven.
ReplyDeleteOf course it all matter!
ReplyDeleteNo it don't, just kidding!
"If it doesn't matter"...and yet, what if it does? What if you hadn't become a poet? What if we hadn't the opportunity to read what you have written here?
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If it doesn't matter...we spend our whole life trying to prove it does, proving things that shouldn't matter. Love how you make me think with this one.
ReplyDeleteIf ... it shouldn't matter when you are all set with it :-)
ReplyDeletethis has me thinking because
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it doesn't matter
then it doesn't matter
if you don't believe until you see
wonderful
Ah. But the only one your actions matter to IS you - it's called peace of mind or soul. Whichever you choose.
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