Sunday, April 21, 2013

Lunes








Moon as umbrella
a new thought
leading me astray

As the sense of you
behind doors
on memory lane





"ellecee"







NaPoWriMo #21
Grace over at Imaginary Garden with Real Toads
challenged us today is to write a new lune poem either using the following:
Kelly Lune -Three lines containing a syllabic count of 5-3-5 (thirteen syllables).
Collom Lune -Three lines containing a word count of 3-5-3 (eleven words).


16 comments:

  1. you've rocked this form, welldone

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  2. Moon as umbrella - what a lovely image.

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  3. Love the idea of a moon as an umbrella. Seems a wonderful thought to lead one astray. Smiles.

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  4. That is quite an image, moon as an umbrella ~ I also like the sadness of the second one, behind closed doors ~

    Thanks for participating in RT Sunday Challenge Ellecee ~

    Have a good week ~

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  5. Intriguing.
    A bit of a puzzle.

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  6. The moon often leads my thoughts--astray or down some particular path I just don't recognize, haven't decided. Enjoyed these.

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  7. I love your lune Ellecee. Beautiful work!

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  8. Ah, thirteen perfect syllables, twice! Well done. I love "a new thought leading me astray"!
    K

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  9. The moon does set the mind to wandering (and wondering!) I loved your lunar lunes.

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  10. Very nice..I too enjoyed your lunes.

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  11. ... let the moon be my umbrella on a rainy, dreary day.

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  12. Love your peaceful image and the idea of the moon being an umbrella :)

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  13. This is calm and beautiful ... really loved reading this !!!

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