Moon as umbrella
a new thought
leading me astray
As the sense of you
behind doors
on memory lane
"ellecee"
NaPoWriMo #21
Grace over at Imaginary Garden with Real Toads
challenged us today is to write a new lune poem either using the following:
Kelly Lune -Three lines containing a syllabic count of 5-3-5 (thirteen syllables).
Collom Lune -Three lines containing a word count of 3-5-3 (eleven words).
you've rocked this form, welldone
ReplyDeleteMoon as umbrella - what a lovely image.
ReplyDeleteLove the idea of a moon as an umbrella. Seems a wonderful thought to lead one astray. Smiles.
ReplyDeleteFantastic lune!
ReplyDeleteThat is quite an image, moon as an umbrella ~ I also like the sadness of the second one, behind closed doors ~
ReplyDeleteThanks for participating in RT Sunday Challenge Ellecee ~
Have a good week ~
Intriguing.
ReplyDeleteA bit of a puzzle.
The moon often leads my thoughts--astray or down some particular path I just don't recognize, haven't decided. Enjoyed these.
ReplyDeleteAw! Shy smiles and love.
ReplyDeleteI love your lune Ellecee. Beautiful work!
ReplyDeleteLovely :)
ReplyDeleteAh, thirteen perfect syllables, twice! Well done. I love "a new thought leading me astray"!
ReplyDeleteK
The moon does set the mind to wandering (and wondering!) I loved your lunar lunes.
ReplyDeleteVery nice..I too enjoyed your lunes.
ReplyDelete... let the moon be my umbrella on a rainy, dreary day.
ReplyDeleteThis is calm and beautiful ... really loved reading this !!!
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