I melt into you
or is it you into me?
No matter the geography
we are blended
our worlds
one
"ellecee"
NaPoWriMo #19
Izy from Imaginary Garden with Real Toads
challenged us to
" Go now and bring back something shiny and unexpected, bring on the melting."
This is a tender melting, speaking of sacrifice and compassion, as well as various versions of love.
ReplyDeleteA perfect response to the prompt..."unexpected" as Izy asked, but very beautifully melting.
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Beautiful blending of emotion and words ....
ReplyDeleteYou are so right, a love like the that, the geography doesn't matter. I like the form of your poem too!
ReplyDeleteYes, my thoughts of melting tended in this direction to. You captured that feeling very well.
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ReplyDeleteHow lovely! Great description of a good relationship.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI loved this so much! I loved the words and I loved the form... it looks a little like a heart!
ReplyDeleteLovely form, and your use of the "melting" prompt was romantic and apt! Good work, L.C. Amy
ReplyDeleteGreat job invoking such a powerful image in so little words. Viva la
ReplyDeleteGreat job with the prompt!
ReplyDeleteA very beautiful thought!
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