Friday, April 19, 2013

One





I melt into you
or is it you into me?
No matter the geography
we are blended
our worlds
one




"ellecee"









NaPoWriMo #19

Izy from Imaginary Garden with Real Toads
challenged us to
Go now and bring back something shiny and unexpected, bring on the melting."

14 comments:

  1. This is a tender melting, speaking of sacrifice and compassion, as well as various versions of love.

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  2. A perfect response to the prompt..."unexpected" as Izy asked, but very beautifully melting.
    K

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  3. Beautiful blending of emotion and words ....

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  4. You are so right, a love like the that, the geography doesn't matter. I like the form of your poem too!

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  5. Yes, my thoughts of melting tended in this direction to. You captured that feeling very well.

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  6. How lovely! Great description of a good relationship.

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  7. I loved this so much! I loved the words and I loved the form... it looks a little like a heart!

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  8. Lovely form, and your use of the "melting" prompt was romantic and apt! Good work, L.C. Amy

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  9. Great job invoking such a powerful image in so little words. Viva la

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