Tuesday, April 23, 2019

Ghosts



It is daylight
but they’re here
whispering platitudes
in my ear

Their spindly fingers
touching my hair
My spine tingles
hard to bear

I quicken steps
my heart to ease
but they hang tight
I feel the squeeze

Please be gone
please leave me now
go quench your thirsts
on another’s brow

No
Wait
be calm 

Have some compassion
these touches they steal
are
their  daily ration


“Ellecee”

Inspired by today’s prompt from

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9 comments:

  1. Ooh! That is a ghostly image, followed by an empathetic conclusion. A very interesting narrative! :-)

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  2. Yes interesting. Sympathy for the devil. The lines describing the fear and the touches are so very good!

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  3. Oooh this is shivering-scary-good!! I have chills running down my spine. Thank you so much for writing to the prompt❤️

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  4. I love the final stanza. If only ghosts would visit me, I’d be happy to show them compassion.

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  5. Oh, I was hoping they were muses or good ideas, but then I went back to read the title. So, who ya gonna call? Fun poem.

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  6. Ghosts do cling and search us to see if they can find themselves in our memories.

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  7. Oh, yes, the poor ghosts – when you think of it that way.

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  8. Hmm.. well yes, ghosts too need a way to survive!

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