Showing posts with label remorse. Show all posts
Showing posts with label remorse. Show all posts

Sunday, April 6, 2025

Poetic Justice

Good Universe Next Door 


It was her engagement party

Not her first

She thought it had taken

a lot of courage to say

yes a second time

His and her friends were milling

about,  drinks and snacks in hand

The talking reminding her of

a cockatiel convention 

Her girlfriend’s husband patted

her finance on the back saying,

loud enough for all to hear,

“Congrats man, wouldn’t be my

 choice but I’ll bet she’ll be great once

you get past the used part”

There was a noticeable moment of quiet

She felt struck, overwhelmed,  ashamed, 

angry,

What right had he to be so crude and in

front of all their friends too

Bastard

She touched his arm, smiled and 

addressed the room in general,

“Don’t pay him any mind, he’s just jealous

‘cause he’s erectile dysfunctional,

Aren’t you honey”

The group broke out in raucous laughter,

Retaliation was hers

Why did she feel

so crummy?




Ellecee



Inspiration from


Good Universe Next Door


6. Poetic Justice

 Start a poem with someone

 (maybe even you) saying the

 wrong thing (maybe even a terrible

thing) and let the draft deliver some 

kind of poetic justice… even if it’s 

imaginary. 

Let the poem carry intense emotion, 

like rage or shame.





Tuesday, April 21, 2020

A Parable

 Ah, you have found me
Linger and listen
So few pass this way
and when they do
they don’t look up
and when they do
they don’t see
Wait, wait, I know you see
Linger and listen
Hearken to a parable
of me


I was a skilful hunter
ensconced in a tree blind,
a doe and her fawn
appearing below me
Although against many laws
secular and sacred
I took aim and shot
A great gust spun me ‘round
Momentarily mesmerized I
awaken
solidified
My head this bulbous bulb
My body to forever be
locked within this tree
Pity me



Ellecee

Inspired by
imaginary garden with real toads - Tree Mythology
and
Skywriting - Parable








Wednesday, April 8, 2020

Tears Laid Waste

The A L'Arora, a form created by Laura Lamarca consists of eight lined stanzas. The rhyme scheme is a, b, c, d, e, f, g, f with no syllable count per line and the minimum length for the poem is 4 stanzas with no maximum length stipulation



Decades ago in the full bloom of youth
she gave birth to a child
a son, brown eyed and fair
melancholy by nature
He needed something more
a different kind of care
Not understanding she
was filled with despair

They were alone in the world
and she struggled to provide
the rent for their roof, the money for care
But he wanted her, no the kindly other.
She held him tightly
whenever she could
but this compromise she offered
came to no good

His father had means and much more
She begged him to help her
She feared for their son
He offered a solution with considerable craft
A stay-at-home aunt
willing to play her part
and welcome this toddler
with his broken heart

She forbade tears, angst and fears
when the decision had to be made
The father arrived with a missile in hand
she must sign away contact or no deal
"They" thought her resolute
they thought "beyond caring"
Not one understood
the remorse she was bearing

Each year on his birthday, she searched in vain
Her children called this her obsession
they grew weary of her quest
So she made it in hiding, to no avail.
How could he disappear
never to be found
Lost in the mists
like a ship run aground

After six decades of searching
came a DNA swath, it
presented a granddaughter, the offspring
of her son long lost
He wanted no part of this mother long gone
no upset to a life lived without her at hand
This, she, with true sorrow,
could well understand


Ellecee

Inspired by
imaginary garden with real toads - The A L'Arora form
and
Skywriting - Craft